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dixierebel001@yahoo.com
10-27-2005, 12:00 AM
This is my first fan fic so be nice, don't go postal on me :D
Daisy_Duke_Girl
10-27-2005, 11:37 PM
WOW! I really like it!!!! I can't wait to read the next post! :D :D :D
dixierebel001@yahoo.com
11-03-2005, 05:33 AM
Don't be afraid ta comment I can take it, good or bad!! :)
DaneyDuke
11-06-2005, 03:11 AM
Nice character dialouge. Unique style with script type for characters speaking. The written out action/place of event is like balladeer comment in an episode.

Good story so far =)

Daney
dixierebel001@yahoo.com
11-06-2005, 05:40 PM
That's because I'm a Unique kinda person...plus I think it's easier for some people to read, and understand better :D
Jamanda
11-07-2005, 03:14 AM
A very good story. It's nice to know we're not the only ones writing Enos/Daisy stories. It's a good, easy-to-read, style too.
dixierebel001@yahoo.com
11-15-2005, 03:32 AM
Thank ya very much, I'm tryin' ta finish it up A.S.A.P,
so I can start postin some of my other stories that are in my head
Jamanda
11-17-2005, 02:10 AM
OOOOOhhhhhh maaaaannn! Must...read...more...GAH! This is getting toooooooo interesting!
dixierebel001@yahoo.com
11-17-2005, 02:41 AM
You have no idea
Jamanda
11-21-2005, 02:06 AM
nice cliffhangers there. assuming she broke the heel of her shoe not the heel of her foot right?
dixierebel001@yahoo.com
11-21-2005, 02:13 AM
Yeah the heel of her shoe :)