Dixie and Beth's RR stories feedback!

[bethie88]

What do y'all think of our stories... The Going Home series and I'm a Danged Fool?

[bethie88]

What do y'all think of our stories... The Going Home series and I'm a Danged Fool?

[smurfette]

I love the Going Home one

[smurfette]

I love the Going Home one

[DixieDavenport]

Thnaks -- Smuffette

Dixie

[DixieDavenport]

Thnaks -- Smuffette

Dixie

[bethie88]

Thanks!

[bethie88]

Thanks!

I Would love to see more of I'm a Danged Fool , Going Home part 3 i hope Luke don't get hurt in the fire wouldn't that be a mess for him to miss the birth of his baby ?

[bethie88]

Thanks, Kitty. And I wouldn't worry too much about ol' Luke... he's a big boy! He can take care of himself. :wink:

[DixieDavenport]

Beth -- LOL!!!

Dixie

[just_me]

I think i'm a danged fool, is great!! Really good wrighting!
You had me up half the night reading it.

(Only thing i noticed wass that first Luke was 18 and Dixie 15 and in the
end Luke is 2 years older and Dixie about 3)

Please keep on wrighting cause i really would like to know how it ends.

Lov,

JM

[bethie88]

Hm... I'm not sure how that happened... Maybe it was 2 1/2 years. lol.

But thanks! I appreciate the good feedback and the constructive criticism.


~Beth

[Moms lil' Daisy]

Hey now I've told ya both that i love readin yur stories and it's about time ya'all got this post up. Anyways, you girls are great, I love readin both "I'm a Danged Fool", and "going home" I've followed them all and they are great. Luv it. You two make a great team and you keep up with eachother. Keep up the great work i look forward to readin them still.

Desi

[bethie88]

Thanks! That's sweet of you!

~Beth

[DixieDavenport]

Tanks ya'll for the kind words!

JM wrote: (Only thing i noticed wass that first Luke was 18 and Dixie 15 and in the
end Luke is 2 years older and Dixie about 3)

Sorry for the confussion firstly. Maybe this will help . In Danged Fool I believe (Beth ??) that Beth is 16 and Bo is 17 almost 18 which puts Luke about 20. I didn't see Dixie being in this until a while back. But it is my intention to have her just under 4 years younger than Luke through my stories. (Ususally this is unknown to all of Hazzard including Luke as she acts and looks much older)

I hope that helped you can also view Dixie's and Jake's character sketches in the other section soon -- if I'd go finish them! LOL

Dixie

[redneck woman]

I've enjoyed reading both of your stories. Your writing really draws a reader into the story. Keep up the excellent work!

[DixieDavenport]

Thanks from us both


Dixie

[bethie88]

*nods* Thanks indeed! That's really nice of you to say!

[miz_smarteepantz]

I just finished Dang fool and have read going home and just let me say I LOOOOOOOVED both. I can't wait to read updates to see what messes these guys and gals get into next. Very entertaining and well written. I have been up really really late reading these because they are too good to shut down till I've reached the end of a page so I had to make myself shut down the computer before starting a new page. Again excellent job and keep it coming

brandy_lou

[bethie88]

Wow! I'm really glad you liked them that much!

[AmandaRobson]

I love I'm a danged fool!!! It's great, you're telling an awesome story. I wanna know what happens next!!! And Dixie your last post was awesome....now ya'll got me hooked and I'm on the edge of my seat! What's gonna happen next???? :D

[DixieDavenport]

LOL Thanks!! Glad you are enjoying it -- sometimes I wonder if I'm boring people....IT's posts like this tht encourage me to continue!!

Thanks again!

Dixie

[AmandaRobson]

Yes yes keep going!!! I love it!!! Go faster!!! LOL I wanna know what happens!! And if I cab help lemme know!!! LOL keep it up!!

[bethie88]

lol! Glad you like it!

[miz_smarteepantz]

Just thought I'd let you both know I'm still enjoying the stories "I'm a Danged Fool" and "Coming Home" alot. I hope you plan to update again soon. I check daily for updates and find myself disappointed to not find one but when I do see an update and read it then the wait was well worth it. Once again great job ladies keep it up.

Brandy

[DixieDavenport]

Glad you like the updates!!! Sometimes LIFE getsin the way of FF But you can count on us updating sooner or later!!! I will be out of town until Tuesday evening /night so I hope to get to write as soon as I get back

Dixie

[bethie88]

Thanks so much... Dixie's right about real life, but we do what we can!

[miz_smarteepantz]

I understand about real life getting in the way. Not only does it get in the way of writing it also sometimes gets in the way of those of us trying to read the FF.

Brandy

[bethie88]

Yeah. I know how that is... My FF.net author alerts come, and I'm like, "shoot, can't read it now..."

~Beth

[B.L. Davenport]

:cry: There hasn't been an update on either of these stories in forever it seems. Please please update soon.


(formerly miz_smarteepantz)

[bethie88]

Have you read recently, B.L. Davenport? We've added since your post here... Hope you like! :) :D

[B.L. Davenport]

:D Yes I read the update just a little while ago and still loving it keep up the good work!


B.L.

[bethie88]

Posted on Going Home 3... Hope everyone enjoys

[LoriDavenport]

i dunno if id post this here but i was reading im a danged fool and might i say you guys rock lol!!!! i love this story, i cant wait to read more from ya'll on this story.

[DixieDavenport]

I 'think' we hope that Danged Fool will lead to Going Home. Both are based on pretty much the same things only different time frames. Glad you like them!


DixieDavenport!