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06-15-2005, 05:23 PM
Telll me what you think of mine and DixieRose-00 new Round Robin story
Julieduke
06-16-2005, 08:49 PM
Intersecting twist on the whole story.
LittleRedVicki
06-16-2005, 10:19 PM
Hello...

Great job on the story so far. Keep up the great work! Keep writing & enjoy it! :)

Take care!

Vicki
JESSI DUKE
06-16-2005, 10:25 PM
I have just one problem with it. How can they be brain dead, but still come back to land of living. It just don't make scene to me. Someone didn't read what the other wrote. If your brain dead as far as I know you can't come back.
The parts that DixieRose-00 wrote are pretty good, but kitty some of yours don't make scene. :-? .
06-17-2005, 02:09 PM
Luke is still in a Coma but unfortunetly the doctor is trying to keep it a secret.