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dukesran1
06-14-2005, 10:08 AM
tell me what you thank
JESSI DUKE
06-14-2005, 04:32 PM
It's good, but it's hard to understand. You have some grammer mistakes.
Other wise it's ok. :)
1hellraiser
06-16-2005, 03:39 PM
I like it. It has some spelling mistakes, but the story is cool. Rosco as Luke's father, has a star wars twist (kinda). But with the spelling, I put my stories, in microsoft word, then run a spell check, then I cut and paste the story. If you need any help with the story, I ran into a roadblock with mine so I can help.
LittleRedVicki
06-16-2005, 09:23 PM
Hello Y'all!

Good job on the new story! Keep up the great work on your writing!

Take Care!

Vicki
DukesFan25
06-17-2005, 05:30 AM
Very good. I hope you update.